Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
1. Introduction:
When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.
2. (benefits of getting a job after school):
Topic sentence: The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons.
(IDEAS/Reasons: start earning money, become independent, gain experience, learn skills, get promotions, settle down earlier, afford a house, have a family)
3. (benefits of higher education):
Topic sentence: On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.
(IDEAS/Reasons: some jobs require academic qualifications, better job opportunities, higher salaries, the job market is very competitive, gain knowledge, become a useful member of society)
4. Conclusion:
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their lives if they continue their studies beyond school level.
